tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4282612866471682237.post3078784614204169863..comments2023-05-26T09:43:26.163-06:00Comments on Robin Ambrose: HNTWAQ: Practice 1Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14628412968169366744noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4282612866471682237.post-33427551257611855172012-06-27T16:28:55.307-06:002012-06-27T16:28:55.307-06:00Great advice, as always! I also found lots of help...Great advice, as always! I also found lots of helpful advice on querytracker too . . . have you ever visited their site? Oh, so I took you up on your offer to give away a query critique on my blog. We'll see if anyone bites:) THanks for the fun!jamieayres.comhttp://jamieayres.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4282612866471682237.post-55824578438556572952012-06-27T11:38:59.759-06:002012-06-27T11:38:59.759-06:00I bookmarked this for my own query-writing purpose...I bookmarked this for my own query-writing purposes! I think your advice is spot on. Finding the heart of the conflict is key. When I initially drafted a query, it pointed back to the fact that my conflict and stakes weren't strong enough. I had to revise the story to get a better query!Stephscohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06328839483008086049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4282612866471682237.post-27939366032864634552012-06-27T09:58:23.835-06:002012-06-27T09:58:23.835-06:00Oh, how well I know that feeling. ;)Oh, how well I know that feeling. ;)Robin Weekshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09413777557796110450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4282612866471682237.post-34889428294297009682012-06-27T09:56:47.315-06:002012-06-27T09:56:47.315-06:00Thanks Robin. I'm going back to the proverbial...Thanks Robin. I'm going back to the proverbial drawing board and see what I can come up with.Randyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16621043763559564251noreply@blogger.com